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poetry of flowers
Poetry of flowers
you are superb
I’m still on the first step
of the ladder ...
who will hold my hand
pull me up
but you
lovely flowery
poetry
all about roses and daffodils...
lotus, jasmine and what have you
lily’s for mummy too
the smiling pansies
and
the purple hue
some flowers we all love
such is it the way of nature to please
ah poetry of flowers
'tis
or is
which
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Fri, 2022-09-09 14:41
Very flowery...
It seems that many people have written about flowers and thoughts of flowers lately. My wife received flowers for her birthday from one of her sons, my mother got many flowers shortly before her death and many at her graveside. I see many flowers still blooming in my neighbor's yard and smell some of them from his yard. You write of flowers as though they mean a lot to you and I believe that I can almost smell them from here. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Fri, 2022-09-09 16:23
GEE
We all are nature's flowers
each one comes for a life's hour
hour by hour
then returns back to nature
more flowers are born
most of us are forgotten
lest one is born
a ROSE
Do see my emblem
NEOS ALL
Lavender
Fri, 2022-09-09 16:51
poetry of flowers
Hi, there, Lovedly,
For many reasons, my siblings used to call me "Peace, Love, Flowers" - one reason being I loved to read and write poetry. The more I read this, the more I admire it. "Lotus, jasmine, and what have you." My favorite line.
Thank you!
L
lovedly
Fri, 2022-09-09 17:31
You are the flower
fragrant as ever Hour to hour glad ur siblings liked you each hour as you have now grown to be like a SUNFLOWER