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The Autumnal fever
Wow,Autumn once again is here
what a lovely season
for all poets so dear
what a beautiful fall
you relay
here it’s raining,
then a bit cloudy
sunnier later
during day
the clouds show anger
but quietly pass away
wonderful trees
leaves,
so colorfully display
my what hues
I wish I could show you
wait
I’ll fetch my camera
for you
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
scribbler
Sat, 2021-10-16 23:35
yep
autumn is by my reckoning the most beautiful time of year. Nice poem
lovedly
Sun, 2021-10-17 00:33
THANKS STAN
But this time
winter entered first
sun forgot to come
so autumn was banged
thank urself not hanged
it's coming in
off and on with a bang
leaves must switch
lol
Geezer
Sun, 2021-10-17 08:02
As disjointed...
as your work is this time, I still see the beauty. ~ Gee.
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lovedly
Sun, 2021-10-17 11:36
as u feel
dis joint me
GEE
lovedly
Mon, 2021-10-18 15:07
no comment
Geeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Geezer
Tue, 2021-10-19 08:41
I felt...
the sharp, cool breeze and smelled the damp air, while my eyes saw the colors that rival the rainbow! ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Tue, 2021-10-19 12:57
thanks
Gee