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Tears will dry also
Hopefully,
after a while when tears have been shed
and
eyes are dry
a new fragrance will rise
and
life will continue
its flow
like the river where once you two did row
But it will be a new boat
new robes
the drill cannot change
you will again kiss
like dew drops in the rain
and
within each others domain
continue to remain
memories will fade away
like dry flowers
only roses
will continue to remind
of those friendly hours
when you dare to recall
and
compare lovers
by how they did you in love share
Then I will appear before you again
tears will come into play
memories will flash back in your life's domain
and
nothing else but sweet fragrance will be the same
You will have to from your past regain
to remain sensibly and reasonably sane.
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
scribbler
Thu, 2017-03-02 12:25
hi loved
I liked the way you used the senses in this. Next to last line was a bit inverted though wasn't it?.............stan
lovedly
Fri, 2017-03-03 01:28
missed you Stan
HOPE YOUR HOUSE HAS BEEN BUILT
and HOW R THE KNEES
to remain sensibly and reasonably sane.
''''to sensibly and reasonably remain...'''''.
any better Stan ???
also as you were away
do read my poem good one
''THE APPOINTMENT''
and help with ur comments
I love your impartial views
Regards to ma'am
my good man
Stan!
lovedly
Sun, 2017-03-05 00:13
for those who missed it
HOPE
FAITH
AND
IMAGERY
are FEW essentials
of our INDIVIDUAL
Makings and MARKINGS
So let me be
ME...
lovedly
Fri, 2021-03-26 18:50
many tears flowed were wasted also
rare tears fall once in a way
Come to Niagara and stay