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Smile -----shared with ya''ll... as Stan would've said
Smile
a fact of life,
a guy exists only;
because girls do
they take his tension away
in many
more than one way
her smile
makes him feel invited,
her glances make
one feel attractive
and
whatever they do,
when you smack your lips,
his stands, awaiting your rescue.
That’s why all guys
to gals say, I love you.
she strokes her hair
and
indicates shall do
hope they will publish this one too
Mark Antony and Dearest Johnny
well
I seem
to have fallen short of smiley words
in this one hence an
added extension.....
((((Composed in 2011
read by only 1108 till today
great don't ever say
NAY!!!)))))))
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
lovedly
Mon, 2018-06-04 16:14
on this site even
stan has not read
raj
Mon, 2018-06-04 16:22
not everyone who reads
not everyone who reads comments
.................................................................
raj (sublime_ocean)
lovedly
Mon, 2018-06-04 16:46
I suppose so
but
how does one know some have read it also
do u know
friendly raj
lovedly
Mon, 2018-06-04 21:38
actually Raj
I wanted you to read
my umbrellah!
scribbler
Mon, 2018-06-04 17:39
Hi loved
Feeling neglected are you? LOL.
In many
more than one way
these lines are a bit awkward as the mix up numeration.In many ways ? Or in more than one way?
but you are correct I suspect in that it is often a smile which lures poor men in (then once in range it changes to eyes).......stan
lovedly
Mon, 2018-06-04 21:37
stan did you miss this
((((Composed in 2011
read else where by only
1108
till today
great ...don't ever say
NAY!!!)))))))
here none read it till...
you stan today