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yes and no of lovers retreat in life
Marriage is a two way connection
a two sides
sharpened weapon
those who slice by the right side
want to try now with the left
both make one's mind
cleft of marriage
what else is left
some divorce
many live in remorse
only fling and flow
some let go
and
living on in happiness
they show
So come my friend
use not your knife
not only will you lose your wife
but also your life
So I suggest just hang on
this misery of life
one day will also be gone
Why advance strife
enjoy with a loving wife
think also of others misery
his couldn't better
than yours be
or may be ,perhaps...
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Free verse
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Comments
Roscoe Lane
Sat, 2016-10-15 02:58
A true,
A true vision of a marriage well written. Regards Roscoe....
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
lovedly
Sat, 2016-10-15 17:51
thank you my dear Roscoe
Roscoe Lane
you tell me
also not to go
stay I will
if you all read me still
Esker
Sat, 2016-10-15 14:40
happy wife...happy life....
a few wanted to marry..I never did....
a child....wanted...
and many other men who were not cut out for the job
I raised theirs as their own as the mothers are more
important then just the fathers..
there are good dads out there..
but many sadly not..
marriage is hard work
give and take...communication
etc....
been in relationships since I
was twenty one
now fifty three
a long haul
lucky enough to
have had a choice
rather then grasp
on
been a great joy
sharing lives with
people
nice to be loved
something I value
in my Values
thank U Lovedly
for this poem
on the Great Union
Mr Wolf!