Workshops on Neopoet are groups that meet for a certain period of time to focus on a certain aspect of poetry. Each workshop participant is asked to critique all the other poems submitted into a workshop. A workshop leader helps coordinate -- they set the agenda, give participants feedback on whether their submissions and critique are at they level expected of them, and after the workshop is over, give feedback to participants.
To join a workshop, first find one that is of interest to you. Once you have found the right workshop (and verified that it is open -- you can find this out in the description below), you can apply to join the workshop.
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Barbara Writes
Wed, 2016-09-14 17:02
Bring in Autumn
A new renga shop is here; bring your favorite autumn haiku, senyru, tanka to the shop. Sparrow, Ian has gotten us started.
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
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Barbara Writes
Wed, 2016-09-14 17:02
Bring in Autumn
A new renga shop is here; bring your favorite autumn haiku, senyru, tanka to the shop. Sparrow, Ian has gotten us started.
*Collaborative Poetry Workshop* American Version of Japanese Poetry ~ Renga ~ Haiku, Senyru, Tanka.
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Barbara Writes
Wed, 2016-09-14 23:41
New autumn renga 15
Summer's sun was lost
resting inside the Spring poem
drift into Autumn.
Autumn's colors have arrive
spring forth browns, yellows and orange
Straight up writes Barbara
I like how spring waits in thought
through winter and fall
I like your choice of earth tones
for a fall's pallette~thank you.
Barbara
Sparrow
Esker
Tanka can be about anything you want it to
Not sure of my tenses; critiques appreciated.
Come one come many, share your favorite winter poem while leaning or sharing haiku, senyru, tanka, and renga: Japanese traditional poetry
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Barbara Writes
Wed, 2016-09-14 17:00
Japanese poetry tip
When writing haiku and senyru you must keep strict Japanese form for it to be what it is, Japanese poetry;
Haiku is strictly anything that's nature: such as the sun moon and stars. Nature also refers to animals plants and inanimate objects; it can be anything not human.
As for senyru it can be all of the above with a human touch, desire or passion: key words such as I me he she saw see my etc makes a haiku a senyru.
Tanka poetry includes both senyru and haiku; couplets added to a senyru or haiku changes it form to a tanka. Once you added your masterful poems to this workshop you've collaboratively written the fourth type of Japanese poem called renga.
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alidzain
Fri, 2016-09-30 03:59
My try
When night comes swiftly
as the reign of day shortens
in Autumn's embrace.
Witness the trees shed their leaves,
preparing for winter's coming.
Alid
alidzain
Fri, 2016-09-30 04:01
Barbara
Did you PM the others about this workshop? I'm not sure if they know about it.
Alid
Barbara Writes
Sat, 2016-11-12 13:19
I didn't
I did submit a blog.
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alidzain
Sun, 2016-10-02 13:08
Mark,
just send in your contributions and I add them here. Not sure where is Barbara. Hope she is okay.
Alid
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2016-10-14 16:40
Thanks for joining
Write your piece me or alid will add it.
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Barbara Writes
Sat, 2016-11-12 13:20
Sure
You in just post your haiku or senyru and me or alid will help you with it and get it posted
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Barbara Writes
Fri, 2016-10-14 16:35
Thanks Alid
Sorry I've been dealing with stuff
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Barbara Writes
Fri, 2016-10-14 16:42
Autumn renga 15
Summer's sun was lost
resting inside the Spring poem
drift into Autumn.
Autumn's colors have arrive
spring forth browns, yellows and orange
Straight up writes Barbara
I like how spring waits in thought
through winter and fall
I like your choice of earth tones
for a fall's pallette~thank you.
When night comes swiftly
as the reign of day shortens
in Autumn's embrace.
Witness the trees shed their leaves,
preparing for winter's coming.
The mighty Oak sleeps
Fruit and leaves scattered abroad
Bared winters garnish
I will hug its stark beauty
Wonder if it dreams as I
Barbara
Sparrow
Esker
Alidzain
Sparrow
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alidzain
Tue, 2016-10-25 16:11
Here's an addition
Autumn renga 15
Summer's sun was lost
resting inside the Spring poem
drift into Autumn.
Autumn's colors have arrive
spring forth browns, yellows and orange
Straight up writes Barbara
I like how spring waits in thought
through winter and fall
I like your choice of earth tones
for a fall's pallette~thank you.
When night comes swiftly
as the reign of day shortens
in Autumn's embrace.
Witness the trees shed their leaves,
preparing for winter's coming.
The mighty Oak sleeps
Fruit and leaves scattered abroad
Bared winters garnish
I will hug its stark beauty
Wonder if it dreams as Ilying bent, broken
lying bent, broken
from natures worst gone up-coast
by magnetic force
we cling to remaining roots
praying the earth shall hold tight
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2016-10-27 21:04
Thanks alid
Autumn renga 15
Summer's sun was lost
resting inside the Spring poem
drift into Autumn
Autumn's colors have arrive
spring forth browns, yellows and orange
Straight up writes Barbara
I like how spring waits in thought
through winter and fall
I like your choice of earth tones
for a fall's pallette~thank you
When night comes swiftly
as the reign of day shortens
in Autumn's embrace
Witness the trees shed their leaves
preparing for winter's coming
The mighty Oak sleeps
Fruit and leaves scattered abroad
Bared winters garnish
I will hug its stark beauty
Wonder if it dreams as l
lying bent, broken
from natures worst gone up-coast
by magnetic force
we cling to remaining roots
praying the earth shall hold tight
Barbara
Sparrow
Esker
Alidzain
Sparrow
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bengt Frisk
Mon, 2016-10-17 17:14
Haiku
In the snow around
the old woman's cottage
is rarely seen some footprints
alidzain
Mon, 2016-10-24 01:58
Hi bengt Fisk
the second verse in your haiku is lacking one syllable count while the last verse should only have 5 syllable counts. Haiku's fomat follows a strict 5-7-5 syllable count. I thought snow is only in winter, not autumn. hmmmm. You still need 2 more verses 7 syllable count lines to form the tanka. The truth is renga is a series of tanka. Tanka is haiku or senryu with added 2 verses of 7 syllable count lines.
Alid
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2016-10-27 20:40
Hi bengt
Welcome tothe renga workshop;
Nice haiku I like;
In the snow around
the good old woman's cottage
rarely seen footprints
How you like the suggestion; add a word take a couple gives your haiku the 5/7/5 necessary format to be called haiku;
Two extra lines of 7 syllables each will make your beautiful haiku a tanka; have an idea what you might add to this masterpiece;
thanks for joining
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Obadiah Grey
Sat, 2016-10-22 09:45
As Winter slaps the arse of
As Winter slaps the arse of Autumn-
and lambs no longer bleat,
I'm glad I saw these socks n bought 'em-
I got really frigid feet.
(Sorry 'bout that !)
Obi.
alidzain
Mon, 2016-10-24 02:01
Obi,
the format is 5-7-5 syllable count verses with two 7 syllable count verses and its more about autumn.. Try again.
Alid
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2016-10-27 21:02
Hi Obadiah glad you are here
Interesting autumn poem, it has a great senyru ring;
Japanese poetry such as haiku, senyru, tanka, and renga follow specific formats:
senyru 5/7/5 haiku 5/7/5 tanka 5/7/5/7/7 syllables per line; and renga is a combination of all five forms.
That's what's this workshop is about, writing, sharing and learning 5 forms of Japanese poetry collaboratively written by many poets.
With that said this is just a suggestion to get you started.
As Winter slaps arse
of Autumn lambs no more bleat
glad I saw these socks
and bought 'em from the market
I got really frigid feet
This makes the first 3 lines senyru and last 2 lines couplet; making the whole poem a tanka ready for the renga. Wonderful poem. I love the socks added in bc frigid feet don't feel good lol.
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Obadiah Grey
Fri, 2016-11-11 13:05
Hiya, Barbara, Sorry, but I'm
Hiya, Barbara, Sorry, but I'm new to the site and being ever so slightly thick in the head didn't know it was a Japanese poetry thread!
Obi.
Barbara Writes
Sat, 2016-11-12 13:23
Ok that's fine
We are here to help you if you want to learn this style of poetry.
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Barbara Writes
Thu, 2016-10-27 20:21
Thanks alidzain beautiful work
Glad to see the new members.
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alidzain
Fri, 2016-10-28 11:35
Hi Barbara
I'm going to be pretty busy by tomorrow so I won't be around.
Alid
Barbara Writes
Fri, 2016-10-28 11:43
Ok
Enjoy your help
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Esker
Fri, 2016-10-28 17:09
hard working Poet Barbara
other work shops berate their participants and delete
the thread...
so all the hard work gone out the window
Or just dont answer the work of the poet....
Ur the only strong stable working poet here
from what I can tell....
and Ive been at the Business in the real world
where people work and do little whinning
..
Ive been having issues today logging in...
If its just me then its just a personal
blocking via corrupt officials
nothing new...
so If I lost contact with U via
others wishes..
I want to say its been a blast
and not MY want to leave
this great place
..
Perhaps someone could
ask the OWNERS and
people that actually
Run this place to check
into this for me...
thank U Barbara
I wish to add more
but fear I might be
blocked here yet
again..
thank U
Mr Esker!
Barbara Writes
Sun, 2016-11-06 20:21
Welcome
It seems to be working fine
I am though keeping eye out for issues that may arise
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chevyvent
Sun, 2016-11-13 08:43
Wonderful piece
Makes me think of nature in a totally different way
Filled with the twists and turns of everyday life
Very well written & I applaud your effort
Mario Vitale
Barbara Writes
Mon, 2017-03-27 01:05
We come to the end of another Renga
Renga16 "Springtime in March" will becoming soon
Thanks to you all for participating and writing another wonderful Japanese Poem
"Words that heal never impose"
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Sparrow
Mon, 2017-03-27 04:09
Dear Barbara
Thank you for all your work in correlating the Renga for the Autumn, we will skip Winter again.
I will send some Springy things later take care and have a lovely life, love to you from us all in the UK.
Yours as always Ian..xx
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti