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To You, My Grandchildren
Speak Out.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Wed, 2020-07-01 14:22
Hi, Teddy
I love minimalist poetry. There is much I've tried to say to my grandchildren through poetry, but actually this covers it.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
L
Geezer
Wed, 2020-07-01 14:25
Surprise...
I am constantly surprised by the ingenuity of your work. I am on the edge here. If it had been any other day or maybe even any other person, I'm sure that my reaction might have been much different. I won't say that I don't know how, because I do. If you understand that, then you will understand how I am on the edge. ~ Geezer.
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Lavender
Wed, 2020-07-01 14:28
Thank you, Geezer,
I do understand.
L
Rula
Wed, 2020-07-01 15:33
Dear Lavender
Not sure I would call this poetry, but I would least you've spoken out loudly with two words.
Thumbs up dear.
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Lavender
Wed, 2020-07-01 16:52
Hi, Rula
As always, thank you so much!
L
Lavender
Thu, 2020-07-02 05:44
Hi, Jerry
Ha, ha! And Telemachus would be correct - JerryK is one of the finest story-tellers, too! But I'm glad we all aren't driven by the same muse in the same poetic direction. There would be no diversity and we would learn nothing.
Thank you for reading!
L