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Words of Passion

Bless the letters and praise the words,
Passion to mourn the human pains,
Birds that flatter, flowers that daze,
Bless the letters, and praise the words.

Bless the letters and praise the words,
Pendants adorn the human strains,
Jewels that matter, gems to blaze,
Bless the letters and praise the words.

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Structured: Western
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This was really quick. I'm thankful to be here with such great friends.
Please feel free to suggest anything to improve this piece
It will be appreciate it my dear friend.

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I love your poem, particularly the repetition of "Bless the letters and praise the words."

I like your structure quite a bit, although if you had your third line rhyme internally as your seventh line did, I think it could help that a bit. Other than that, happy new year, and it's nice to meet you!

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Always great to see new friends reading my humble poetry. You suggestion is spot on and always welcomed. Looking into it.
Highly appreciate it.

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I really cant thank you enough for your accomplished and thoughtful constructive feedback.
I can't but appreciate each and every suggestion you've presented to improve this little piece.
I shall certainly look into them and take them into consideration.
Soon
Highly appreciate it... Always

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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thank you enough sir Alan S. Jeeves.
Editted as suggested.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
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Really liked this one, succinct and says so much.

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First time to meet so I want to say to welcome to neopoet and and welcome to my page. Getting such a kind comment from a published poet means a lot.
Thank you so much.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words
........Robert Frost☺

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