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In Wonderland
My heart was pounding
given choice of
paper boat or balloons.
I jumped into the boat
grabbing balloons as sails.
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
IRiz
Fri, 2018-11-30 16:19
hmmm
hmmm
interesting write
it makes me think
IRiz
raj
Sat, 2018-12-01 03:49
thanks IRiz ..appreciate your
thanks IRiz ..appreciate your visit...good to know it made you think...i may be tweaking it up a bit...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Sun, 2018-12-02 15:25
thanks April for your
thanks April for your visiting this page...yes, this is about fantasy and thrill...grabbing the opportunity when it knocks on the door..
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raj (sublime_ocean)