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Which would you Choose?

Voices walking 2 beside
No eyes or ears for another
Mockingbirds echo a sing-song tune
All the same, to a worried lover

Moments flee with the time machine
Still they speak to only others
Write it down I beg of thee
How else might I speak, thy brother?

And if those ears shed their deaf
Voices walking 2 beside
Would they be the same Damn words
Or just a sound from deep inside?

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the natural voice vs the poetic voice
or the cultured voice vs raw, real voice
or the sane man's voice vs the insane one
or just one ordinary voice with a lot of mental machinations going on in the background?

I don't know, I pick #4

cool, unless I missed the gist.


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