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Which am I...~~~By Lovedly please me

Doctor Jekyll~~~ Mr Hyde
two in one body reside
inside
one for day as doc
the other for night
knock knock

believe me I am the real
loved
then
lovedone
then
lovedly
then
Rosy me

Now I'm done
Someone help me
who am I can you tell me
a sole imagery in eternity
or infinity
least of all in oblivion

if this poem gets posted
as from Lovedly
I am then the real one
Loved /Lovedly
ROSE flower one

Some one resolve
the mystery for me .

Some think I am young
others feel I need now
to RIP

what is your opinion
will you tell me
Paul Gee or Stan
anyone

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
This poem is from Lovedly real one
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

sure who you are, but your riddle based poem is really refreshing.

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

why a DOT ONLY

author comment

The comment was for someone else. For you, the name is not important, it is the man behind the scene! ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

So much. Are we sure he didn’t ghostwrite this?

The piece remiinds me of “Doctor Jimmy and Mr Jim” and some the duality in life.

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MY LAPS TOP GETS ZINXED an old model as me
now they show me as ROSY ME
will continue till I enter the Blue Sea
continue to read as
LOVEDLY
my plea

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kindness always and ever pays
there's problem these days

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I wait and see
at sea

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