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The Way I See It

People tend to overlook
The beauty of sun
The fact of the matter is
Some people may never
See another one

It's more than just colours
In the sky
But more like the way
Angels fly

The sunset reminds me of
A pallet of paint
Not one is ever
Quite Acquaint

It could be as simple
As 2 colours mixed
Or all the colours in
The world at
My fingertips

The beauty of the
Sunset is one thing
I'll never pass by
Its peaceful
Just watching
The sky

on a cold winter evening
Or a warm summer
It's always an
Incredible delight

A sunset is the opening music
to the night
There's never a need
To have any fright

People could look at
The sky and
See nothing at all
But to me its more
Than just a blank wall

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the beauty (of) the sun
quite aquiant? seems like you forced that rhyme

these are only suggestion but why did you mic rhyme with free verse you needed to stay with one or the other


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