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Wait till you can fly sky high

Beauty you describe
is like tomorrows volcano

many guys would try to fly along with her
such magnificence one ought to know

you describe in your own words so lovely
violin music I can imagine
like Beethoven
I have no ears

But by the grace
of Almighty
none has ever seen
I too can visualize upon your
you tube screen
lovely as one could be
She

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
A poem within a poem
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

are you writing about Ivanka Trump? This is one thing I enjoy about your writing...it is vague, but much to the point...looking for more, lovedly

Thomas

....so like my lost dreams...the flood

my brain waves jump and my synapses plead
post a poem
please I do

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the lure of your works, is the vagueness; so that one can insert their own vision of what it is about. I must try to remember that! ~ Geez.
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