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VOYEUR (summer fun contest)

Small limbs stir in the day's heat
as a less warm wind begins to blow
while across the road young neighbors treat
nearby folks to a bikini clad show.

Rapidly thunder heads build
and limbs go from stir to bending
while the sun begins to yield
to dimness that the storm is sending.

Then suddenly a flash of light
explodes within the heavy air
sending songbirds into flight
seeking out shelter somewhere.

Just this side of nearest hill
a curtain of rain comes through the gloam
neighbor sunbathers give all a thrill
as they run scantily to shelter of their home.

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Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

this poem is a testimony of the source of your inspiration and your broad spectrum vision
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raj (sublime_ocean)

Not so broad as to have used binoculars ............................

author comment

did you mean "broad" or you meant "bold" ..:)
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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