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UNIsex

Ladies!!

before calling for equality..
in a Feminine Revolution,

are you ready
to share the same
washrooms,
toilets,
hairdressers,
and ...
the list
goes on
longer
every day !

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The title and the information are borrowed from an article in "Friday magazine" Issue No. 09 Vol. 17
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they stink,

I agree

Do it in different places.

cheers,
Jess
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that was meant to be a rant against those who call for equalitity between men and women.
Men are men and women are women.
Thanks for the comment.

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but many corporate bathrooms are n]oiw unisex, /to save costs

What is the cost?

cheers,
Jess
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I think the begotten costs are much more expensive sir!

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the Alpha conquest drive....
be we dark skinned albinos or winos
drunks and theives
tea totalers

urinals are fast convienent ways of not using
much water...or sitting
(as was one king of england dispatched
by sword sitting on the pit privay)

and in industrial times faster was better
production for next to nothing

but yah who would want this!!
the lesser of the men the women dont want

ideal is to rise par.NOT share all
emenities

I have worked for Matriarchsystems for
years and been admired and despised
by some matriarch systems too

I love Law and worked for a lot of
places as ordinary labourer..
cheap ordinary labour

I know do skilled work
crafting artistically items for
people with mobility issues

(I help to make plaster moulds
for people so the Techs can
make braces or arch supports
children and elders!!)

I listen to CBC every other day
for my half day

I read newspapers Business
sections
and television

I have always lived with intelligent
women...My mother had her own
car..her own bank account
cut the grass raised us kids
and admired my fathers old school
work ethic and some of his old
boy networking

she hated his lodge though
the secret society
he belonged too
and basically drew us away
from joining

And then I loved the Girly Girls
women in their dress
serving coffee at the counters
in their finery their eyes
their smiles
the curtsies

All the women I dated had their
own jobs or were half workers
in their systems
with their very alpha males

and they picked alpha males
after they dumped my ass
for my radical ideologies and
addictions

Still keep in touch though

I agree that men are men
and women are women

its a good poem and a good
rant Rula

I have gone and read your
comment link
excellent thoughts for me
I thank you

I love creative people
with sharp wit
and humouor and
expressive verve on issues

must go and walk dogs
weekend here

Thank You!

sorry.

cheers,
Jess
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hes bloody busy these days
all the new found friends
all that hacking he was doing
He greatly improved
guess twas not a hack
after all..

I miss him too
shall take a walk about
pack some tucker
look in the dreamtime

Thank You!

Many thanks for the add and I am really happy you
share with me the same point of view .
Have a nice week end to you sir.

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and loved Frieda the artist
they always said why didnt
the women rise up past
Point.......point is very hard
work...Joan of Arc for
instance and Princess Diana

Ghandi...she did grand work
but at cost

a lof ot systems are based on caste
or the old practicality
that the men take risk and get
the reward
or to luxuriate

the world today equality is about Laws
and even now in American Military
women are possibly very much
going on battle missions

I read much on women warriors
and Civil War a women who fought
alongside them men for years

and then entertainment
Annie Oakley and
Rasputins daughter taming bears
in the circus

I am sure women surgeons and judges
would not want to share everything of
men.......sexuality should be a caste system
perhaps...

interesting new light on things for me
Rula

just heading out on my little trail walk...
I will think of this...very much

our NORTH ern weather here is cold again
and refreshing

clause it is the option for change
this weather
like writing
chapters but I have a good constitution
for this

Thank You ;)

but a book-worm and a philosopher too !!
I agree women can do everything . Sometimes or most of the times
women are mentaly stronger but there should be certain limits to each
I believe.
Many thanks for your second visit.

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One day when there are only the female gender as humons seem to be heading for then Unisex places will be fine.
I open a door for a lady bar one, and that is the toilet door.
A lady or man both need a place to be for toilet things and there the two have no need to mix, other than those rooms both should be treated with equality.
I am from the old school and some men still try to retain that Macho image but they are missing so much in this world.
You stay as you are and enjoy all the things that are there in your hands.
Yours as always, Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

We are from the same old school sir!
Yes i can see no need for such mixed rooms. As i said earlier the cost shall
be unfortunately costly

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I have always wondered why women here would want equality.........Why ask for a demotion ? lol...........stan

a demotion ha!!
Thanks for stopping . I think nothing ever would satisfy women .

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When women are liberated I shall be FREE,
Yours Sparrow

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

The only real advice I ever give to the little girls that I teach is- 1. Don't talk to boys. 2. For goodness sake, don't let them touch you and 3. If you must be near them... wear a surgical mask and gloves.

I can suggest these things because I was a boy once and I know how disgusting they are. Besides, the only thing they ever do is turn into men... which is worse.

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Coming from a man. Are you honest? And if men didn't have those urinals where would gays go?

but honest. Always
and about your question ff, I think no one is against those urinals as much as being against sharing the same public toilets.
Thanks for the visit.

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best pieces of advice my self to my lone daughter.
Welcome back . Though not one of my best pieces and not of my style at all, I very much appreciate
giving the time to share your thoughts. Many thanks sir!

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Your poem is more a statement but there's nothing
wrong with that. I didn't see much to include in the "list
goes on longer every day" ... I think what women want
in the long run is equal rights and in my opinion, they should
have that in every country. As far as separate "public" bathrooms,
there wouldn't be anything wrong in combining them as long
as there weren't the nasty urinals and every stall had a door.
We don't have separate bathrooms in our homes !!!
Hairdressers? Most places in America cater to both women
and men. Is it not like that there?

for sharing your thoughts.
Yes, I agree with you. I couldn't even think of more to add to the list but I think we have something new every day so you can never guess what's coming up, can you? As I stated before these are some of the places that as mentioned in that article. The whole thing is new to me. In the Arab world, there are no such shared places. And when we talk about public washrooms and toilets it isn't anything like sharing the same bathroom at home, is it?
However, as for the hairdressers, yes, there are some men working in some Women Saloons but there are no women and men sharing the same saloon again.
Again this is not where at least in the part of the world where I live.
Thanks again for dropping by and commenting. I appreciate it indeed.

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I apologize if I cause any unintentional insult. I sure am ignorant of what "feminism" is . I have never been fully aware of that agenda . As a Muslim female, I have been given the rights which make me more than satisfied. That's why I have never looked for more into the feminism revolution.

However, I believe that when women ask for equality with men, they have to accept some sequences that haven't been anticipated in the first place. I hope you understand that what I wrote here-though appeals to me as a theme, is a reporting of an article I read. The theme is new to me and I wanted to represent it in my words and hence come those lines.

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