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Unhinge fringe:
Missile strikes attacks
Pushed by political hacks
Innocent deaths stacks
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Demented tormented
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weirdelf
Fri, 2018-01-26 05:58
a small suggestion
Missile strikes attacks
Missile strike attacks
and
Innocent deaths stacks
Innocent death stacks
or
Innocent deaths stack
wadyareckon?
Cool piece, ever read any Roger McGough? One of the Mersey Sound poets, contemporaneous to the Beatles, fellow Liverpuddians. This work reminded me of his "Icarus Allsorts"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CQ4pmGi0qDc
http://www.angelfire.com/dragon/erzulie/Icarus_Allsorts.htm
cheers,
Jess
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OriginalRhyku
Fri, 2018-01-26 07:03
I enjoyed reading "Icarus
I enjoyed reading "Icarus Allsorts" by Roger McGough. My Rhyku was based on the recent spate of missile attacks but Mr. McGough's poetry reminds us that lunacy exposed by literacy have been around since the first missiles were sent aloft preceded by the first warnings. Thanks to you, Mr. McGough and the Beatles' "Imagine".
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