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Unfolding
The caterpillar contains the butterfly
The tadpole the frog
The monkey the man
My DNA is still unfolding
I wonder where I'll be
A million words from now
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Shadowdancer3349
Thu, 2018-10-04 01:07
Greg
expand on this thought