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un-Pythagorean
our world keeps on changing
so too has geometry
when two alienated nations don't meet
the line of a peace accord
when most things are obtuse
and right is just a notion
the Pythagoras theorem
is no more an algorithm
when peoples get divided
by incongruous isms
virtual seems so real
a trivial illusion
in today's geo metrics
where the angles keep on changing
these dynamics spell the end
of the Pythagoras regime
what's good today
becomes stale tomorrow
nothing is constant
except change
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Last few words:
With due respect to the scientific fraternity including Pythagoras who have made notable scientific contributions in their respective fields...i would like to clarify that reference to Pythagoras theorem is made in this poem in the general context that theories and postulates of bygone years need to evolve over time and not to really challenge his acclaimed theorem about right angled triangle...the words right...angles etc. are in the context of this theme only..
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Comments
Rula
Tue, 2018-07-24 12:10
Hello raj
I wonder what inspires this piece but I must say that it has grabbed my attention though I'm not that good at maths :)
"nothing is constant
except change"
How true ... Thumbs up!
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raj
Tue, 2018-07-24 13:55
Thanks for reading Rula as
Thanks for reading Rula as you do mostly and in doing so pulling this out of the undiscovered zone...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
author commentlovedly
Wed, 2018-07-25 10:32
glad you also accepted
that change alone is CONSTANT
thanks pya... what mathes
and u raj
ur rosy poem was lovely
if u'd permit
I'd like to modify it
Westernly
style