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Two Little Words

This poem
called on me
today.

Only two words
came
to ask if I would
like to
play,

Let
Love...

Yes, just
Let
and
Love...

Your heart
can write the rest.

I'm too busy
dancing.

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
so long since I visited here... too busy dancing :) love to all xxx
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Comments

Lovely to see you again back to two Moonrakers now again.
But only two little words from you, "Let Love" mind you they are lovely words and can be added to many things.
Great to have you return we have missed you,
Yours Ian.T

.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

I like the simplicity of this and how you structure it, it carries the reader to the end in a smooth embraced dance.
Very, very good write.
Two little words, that are so huge!

Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

to see you again! And such a great poetic-thought! Nothing more is needed. ~ Gee

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Don't dance to long, as i'll miss your words so wise. Love Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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