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Twilight quiet night

In the twilight
Dark clouds
Dreary night
Hurricane looming
Expected to hit the Florida coast....

silent night before a storm
I feel the call of nature
Beyond the trees....

Storm Dorian
It has been named
I feel it’s winds
Though not one tree swayed out of place....

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Tho mot one tree sway out of place....
I think you mean to say, Though not one tree sways out of place.

Like a calm before a storm
I was wishing for different language for that line. It does work but is more a cliche.

Thanks for the news, Barbara.
Perhaps keep us informed with more poetry about Dorian?
Later,

~Mark~

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i appreciate the corrections..

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