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Total Eclipse Of The Heart

Total Eclipse Of The Heart

Lines are being formed through a revolution
Shade of grey torn in the variation of the wind
A song to being sung yet I don't know where to begin
As a nation we have come to far not to turn back now

An angelic host of spiritual beings
A chorus is being sung to summon a passing few
We look up to see the eclipse of the sun now torn in two
By choice we live with a whole host of ideas

There is a strong beat of the nightly swell
A good story in which to tell
Run to the hill for cheap thrills pays the bills
A promise in the dark has been brought to the fullest of light

There's a wonderful rainbow in the sky
Shades of red, orange & blue
Let's honor our nation's flag or you say it's nothing new
We as a nation have certainly bitten off far more then we could chew

You have lit the flame that ignited the spark to what it was I have been waiting for,
A glance at the hand that feeds it
The moral of the story lives on in the vast memory of the heart !

© Mario Vitale 2016 . All Rights Reserved.

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Ah, I remmber there's a song with the same title which is actually one of my fav. Good one


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