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Too Many Slogans (sunku)

Too Many Slogans

Believe or
Don’t move at all
Like pray

Take my
Mind and pull
Your way

I’ll let
You slip off
Like glass

Editing stage: 


just trying this out :)

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Welcome to the workshop
Your mysterious sunku will be my food for thought.
Bye for now, I am off skiing


skiing! I don't get much of that in the desert. :) Hope your staying warm!

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