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Three Pivots

The reality and truth
since we as humans
are and must be exposed to is
love at first sight
as in the early morning twilight
which is quite different
to the one we can imagine
at the twilight
after the sun has set...
Romance, lust and love
are three pivots
about which we all humans revolve
to survive
that's not only my surmise
but my life's
most experienced prize
ask my spouse
do now more
I arouse

So I share my life openly with all

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Enjoyed this poem very much. Regards Roscoe...

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.


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Just Think For 5 Minutes
Just think
for 5 minutes only
but daily
like meditation

All is good theory
as you learn History
do a bit of Science also

Darwin's evolution

medical genes

you may emerge
from the cocoon
you still
love to exist in

Brain power is must
that alone a reason
for God's emergence
all else is naught

Don't use your brains
no one will help you
not even your God
till he embalms you
once you reach your


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