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sun is my god and our god

sun is my god and our god

can you imagine
anything born without the sun


so god is manifest
in SUN only
that only time can tell
but when I discourse with normal
intelligent humans
I don't discuss religion

' tis ones faith and belief
let them in themselves
find a relief

who am I to over shadow the heavens
and imagine a sky without a sun

then there will be



no one will think of

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A good view of things, yet think young Bard if we were pure energy we would not need the sun, and at the same time we could become part of a sun not yet seen here or ever will be.
Energy will flow as an eternal wave just don't miss the sojourn,
Take care thinking of you, Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

when our bodies are burnt
some elements remain
isn't it?
So we are composition of minerals and to keep active
we invent innovate and bring about discussions....
yet I don't want any one to take my view
be what you wil
the sojourn will be on

but only as long as we have a sun
AND Human beings a son .
to continue transmission of X and Y chromosomes
to support the selfish gene

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Well I wonder what happens when our lovely sun becomes an all consuming red giant, it aren't green and we aren't no sweet corn.
We shall return to being a free energy pattern unique as we have always been, alongside all the other unique patterns that belong to the whole.
Then in the distance those patterns may join again, to allow us to be humons or some such container, lol.
Take care that you retain your pattern young Bard,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

well done green
red the winner

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