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STREET WISE
If you see
A poor old man
Sitting on the street
Then pick him up
Dust him off
And put him on his feet
But if he starts
To complain
By giving you some lip
Then sit his ass
Right back down
And don’t leave him a tip
WIZDUMBs BY JA 268
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2017-11-05 10:04
Nice little limerick...
Just goes to show that some people like where they are and resist having to change. I wouldn't change a thing. ~ Geezer.
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Chiori
Mon, 2017-11-06 11:22
some people are okay with the
some people are okay with the current situation they are in, but if they never demanded for help or don't want to leave where they are and continue, let them be.
always remember to make a critique of other poems
using the hoe is not madness for nothing