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Straight From Your Pen

Great poetry comes straight from
Pens of great poets 
Not stifled by egos 
That hinder 

Willing to work on weaknesses taking liberties
Born from loins and wombs
Not literal, just poetical
That heals 

Inner self tortured by soul
Flaming with passion and distresses

Straight from your pen 
Titles were created, inducing
Creativity, flexibility in
Writing grandeur poems

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Nicely done and thank you for using my title suggestion that is greatly appreciated
Chrys

Chrys
Let your mercy spill on all these burning hearts in hell(Leonard Cohen)

You are welcome. It just fit perfectly with my idea for a poem that expresses this workshop in view

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Those pesky typos. Thanks glad you pointed them out

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I see Mark beat me to the 1st stanza typos lol. And you're right about great poetry and titles coming from great poets while we lesser ones struggle to be just OK...........stan

You are one of the great ones. Modesty is your crown.

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