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Springtime Haiku (Western) - June Contest

She is the springtime
A garden was given her
when a rose was sought

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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Last few words: 
Love the western form of haiku. My modest effort for the June contest.
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Not Explicit Content

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Hello, Michael,
Your poetry is breathtaking - there are no words to describe the emotions this stirs. Beautiful.
Thank you!
L

Wow, thank you L! I always appreciate your visits, and glad you liked this one.

Cheers

Michael Anthony

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the inference that she would be happy for just the rose, but has been given much more.
Geez.
.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

Thanks Geez! Always an interesting challenge for me to say something worthwhile within the strict western form.

Cheers
Mike

Michael Anthony

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Got it Mark, thanks!

Cheers

Michael Anthony

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