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Spring reminder (spring Haiku contest)
As spring takes over
breaking the hold of winter
the south dreads summer
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Sun, 2021-06-27 21:41
Spring Reminder
Hello, Stan,
I love the active movement here - very continuous and fluid. I can feel the summer heat and humidity!
Thank you!
L
scribbler
Mon, 2021-06-28 00:42
Yep
Here in the deep south we can hardly enjoy spring because we know that the oppressive heat of summer comes next lol. Thanks for the visit
author commentGeezer
Mon, 2021-06-28 05:48
Nice ...
I'm sure that it's true!
~ Geez.
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scribbler
Mon, 2021-06-28 09:23
Hi yankee lol
I read once that one can tell if a person is from the north or south by asking whether they like spring or autumn best. Those from the south prefer autumn because it means the end of summer and those from the north prefer spring because it's the end of winter
author commentMichael Anthony
Tue, 2021-06-29 10:35
Nice one Stan - thanks!
Nice one Stan - thanks!
Cheers
Michael Anthony
scribbler
Tue, 2021-06-29 16:02
Thank you
for dropping by
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