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spring life

Pink Blossoms floating
Orchestra of frogs
Sunlight beams across leaves

Style / type: 
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


I see that you have been a member of Neopoet for at least ten months. I am curious; why haven't you posted something before this? I like your Haiku, it has a Spring-like quality, that has the sound of frog's mating calls. [I heard them as I read your piece.] ~ Geezer.

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From me for you:


croakers bellow for mates
on floating water lily
tadpoles in shallows

lol fun isn't it? I can't seem to slow down once I'm started up..
Good job,

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