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spring life

Pink Blossoms floating
Orchestra of frogs
Sunlight beams across leaves

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Structured: Eastern
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Not Explicit Content

Comments

I see that you have been a member of Neopoet for at least ten months. I am curious; why haven't you posted something before this? I like your Haiku, it has a Spring-like quality, that has the sound of frog's mating calls. [I heard them as I read your piece.] ~ Geezer.
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