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Spring For

Watch out every love-week
"Spring Fever"
Heart shaped flowers
No April Fool more showers
The Country spring air

His sunshine over your hair
Feeling homesick you
better be quick
Wait it's Spring Newsweek
More flowers to pick springtime
everywhere the Rainbow

" Bingo" she's "Spring clean"
Baby Bella salads "Mango"
mixed love her greens
The first day of Spring the Robin
bring the rain Mary Popin

Smelling the fresh cut grass
Spring break exam you pass
Going first-class poet star

Scarlet fever rose civil war
Spring into action who for?
She's the Spring Chicken

He broke the bed spring
The cat's tail rose winged
Danced ballet slipper pink
The wink Robin egg blue
His lips of springtime
We just feel it so true

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Free verse
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Comments

feeling it. I think it's just a bit too cryptic. ~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

I won awards for my poems also in magazines so I really don't get it why you are so abruptly cruel in your words. You are supposed to be helpful and kind you really broke a nerve in my heart

author comment

...open your head.
the red-breast will be heaving
long after you're dead, lol.

nice one, Robin.
keep flying with it.

Best wishes.....val

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