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Oct 20, 2024
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The Sound of the Seagulls
The sound of the seagulls,
Once alien to me,
When washed ashore on this island,
Across the deep blue sea,
Every face a stranger,
And in a foreign land,
Far away from what I knew then,
Afraid of what was planned,
The winds of change still blow,
Take me like a feather,
As I float along on their breeze,
Through storms that I weather,
The tides have been and gone,
Washed away footprints in the sand,
Found peace in the unknown,
As I held my own hand,
One day i’ll find my home,
Find my place amongst the people,
Until then i’ll find comfort in,
The sound of the seagulls.
— Abbey Jenkins, Oct 20, 2024
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John Leslie O'Kelley
1 year 9 months ago
Abbey Jenkins
I thought this was great it resounded the way that i feel! We all need to find a place and people to call home. Keep up your faith, it will come too you!
Abbey Jenkins
1 year 9 months ago
Leslie
Thank you Leslie, it’s great to hear this resonated with you. Writing is a great form of expression for me, thank you for your comments!
Lavender
1 year 9 months ago
The Sound of the Seagulls
Hello, Abbey,
Welcome to Neopoet. This is a lovely poem, and feels both literal and metaphorical. Very reflective. Hope to see more of your work!
Thank you!
Lavender
Abbey Jenkins
1 year 9 months ago
Lavender
Thank you so much Lavender, i appreciate your comments!
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