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Soul Knight

Submitted by Kent on Sat, 2018-12-08 12:54

Is there more?
To eat,be born, work, sleep .

Growing without being able to edit your past
Eating without getting filled up
Working every time just to survive
Sleeping just to wake up to another reality.

Is that all,
Is there more,are these what the world can offer
Is there still more
Is there another phase

Our Dreams
Is that the real world
Is this present life a fiction
Explanation's?

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

Comments

Eumolpus

Sat, 2018-12-08 13:11

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There are many good performers, I like Bette Middler's
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X9TKVHRHr74

I hope this answers your question

..

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

Kent

Sat, 2018-12-08 14:17

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Thanks eumolpus

All who wonder ,are not lost!

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