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Smoke signals & Shadows dance

shadow is to light
what smoke is to fire

by the same token
a poem should leave
a trail of imprints on the sand

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

cause and effect. i like this short poem. it inspires me to write, knowing my words will create light and fire, shadows and smoke, if i focus on my craft.

Thanks Greg for reading and connecting spot on with the underlying message. Wishing you the best of inspiration to write..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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