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She Found A Hubby

not 6 months yet
I cannot bet

she instigated him
may be
as too dependent on
was always she

but now in one stroke
got his belly
full of mint jelly

no- not a new hubby
she'll find a better baby
not whole time drunk actually

ah he must also be enjoying
games in heaven
no condoms
no restrictions
glad he must be

saved himself of
doc was he

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


I am speechless, I love this it sounds like the suduction of a doctor.

I know you have your own way of writing as do we all, but I would truly love to see you write something that maybe more people could relate too and comment on, lovedly I mean this in the most genuine way. You have the most lovely pen hand and you are really funny.

Thank you...Teddy

I have learned in life
many keep poking you from behind
knife in hand
but keep smiing

I get no comments or hardly any
can you reedit this
and teach me
how to get fish in my sprawling net
I just can't beget

off the cuff poet

author comment

I do believe you are happy as you are but if you ever have anything you want help with then just come to mind me. I know you get inspiration from others so just incase I am around here for you.

Thank you...Teddy

to me ur like a poetic mummy
thanks for your generosity
I shall be coming
as and when

but please to read me continue
very few do

The four who did are
and gone
left me forlorn
but of course
you and Gee
do stay on

author comment

I am back here after a while...hope all is well..

take care...

raj (sublime_ocean)

hope you have been well
better luck in neo
many poets are now of your time's dead
raj _sublime

author comment

You too take best care Lovedly...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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