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Mar 24, 2012
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Second Anniversary
Celebration
Of
Two years
Two hearts
One
Name
Coming
Of
Two
Together
Oneness
Nirvana
— faerybeki, Mar 24, 2012
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: a couple of acrostics, written for my husband, in celebration of our wedding anniversary :)
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Critiques
Nordic cloud
14 years 2 months ago
A sweet memory dropping down
A sweet memory dropping down the page like a lovely little water colour painting.
Nordic cloud.
faerybeki
14 years 1 month ago
a sweet memory indeed dear
a sweet memory indeed dear Ann, I like what you wrote about a 'lovely little watercolour' :) I hope there will be a large collection of these Anniversary acrostics to help us both remember, much love to you xxx
Roscoe Lane
14 years 1 month ago
Nice thoughts,
Nice thoughts well written, hope you have many more years in nirvana. Regards Roscoe..
judyanne
14 years 1 month ago
how clever beki
to use cotton
nice acrostics
happy anniversary for whenever it was
may you stay in your nirvana for forever xx
love judy
Ian.T
14 years 1 month ago
Beki
Lovely way to hold those two years wrapped up with Cotton.
Take care of you, Young Moonraker,
Yours in Exile, Ian.T