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Seasonings:
Spring before Summer
and Autumn before Winter
Seasonal Splendour
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Just Rhyku
Editing stage:
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Comments
Cloudthings
Fri, 2019-03-15 09:00
Nice & neat
I am not an educated critic regarding poetry (other stuff, yes), especially rhyku. But I enjoyed this & it seems to be as perfect as it can be. Now you have made me keen to go & research rhyku (I understand the significance of the rhythm & line limitations, I mean I want to know more :) )
Cheers
Anni
My dear friend always told me "Water the seeds of joy first"