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In Search of Peace
The seats are all patiently awaiting
the next congress of eager onlookers
as the lights have shown the pathways to home
and now only shine for serenity
The lonely moon bows its chest in full crest
brushing the image of pregnant trees
onto the placid canvas of water
letting our minds know it is time to dream
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
Is the internal logic consistent?
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Comments
Esker
Sun, 2016-06-26 23:58
fresh clairvoyants
stale charged air
and nature the sole provider
that saves the savage breast
soothed by imagery and
quiet respite
and the multitudes take too
their chairs..
thank U!
eightmenout
Sat, 2016-07-16 15:34
Steve
Thanks for stopping by. I needed some good words to read
Scott
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