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Sabrina Corgatelli - Slaughters Creations gifts

Her avaricious eye's
denude all they surround
flicking the salted sugar,
flavours of life fall short
with a diamond tipped tongue 
hardened, by, unending desire
of ever chaffing need, gnawing
not enough, more, more, more !

Damaged and broken
no longer a vessel of humanity,
the hunt began anew on
foreign soil, a summer rental,
this she-monster thrashes Monkey's
by out smarting the Girraff 

Chasing butteflies and rainbows
stealing pots of gold,
slowly murdering hope
as is fixed on the target,
she throws sticks on string
make of titanium, fires cannons
at raindrops and finally
hated, finds an explanation
in Hunting for Dummies

Her black soul bowed with death
writhes as she walks evil,
hands intently sprayed murder
on the wonders in creation,
freely and legally she kills 
without fear or remorse

Mother earth is whispering,
prurience will bury a corpse
delusions hold her simple mind
unseeing dead tissue now
rots in her head

judgement shall fall
when the kingdom of earth
rise, as convocations circle
marking the target,
drawing the prides in
stalking this killer of hope
savagery stirs up the dust
soaked with justices blood

Ascending Kings shall roam,
compassionate kind people
shall ne' have no need to fear
a wide magenta smile.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Last few words: 
http://www.today.com/video/idaho-huntress-sabrina-corgatelli-talks-about-dead-giraffe-photos-497399875678 ...There is no explanation that anyone can come up with that will convince me that these animals deserve to be slaughtered ...
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Comments

now you've made me want to know more. You're describing a killer of hope with such vivid emotion! Good job!

Alid

There is little we can do in the face of such money.
This world has bred a man and sometimes a woman that needs to kill because their little minds cannot fathom tomorrow, not to worry young lady there awaits a time of reckoning where they will have to judge themselves in all they have done on this Earth plain.
There they will find like souls and sink into a place where there are no other souls, other than murderers and the like.
We shall be able to belong to a greater group that will rejoice in perfecting another facet of our Spirit,
They are not welcome in my cave,
Yours as always Da xxx

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