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S t a r k n e o u r o s i s . . .
coma penchant
threaded fears invaded
the oil crisp slide
a dream touch away
lanolin burn creme
pervaded
soft as that Autumn blush
cropped and tender brush
while a moist wind of river
groped the poplar rush
high arcade crystal
cd spinner
come in from the hate
of that dark breath
full of night
you smell of
stars
and the wounds of
ache
overflow their grave
like a sure Lost Love
the nails across my
throat and heart
a serpent skeleton
prance
....
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Comments
loved
Tue, 2013-01-08 02:55
not sure
I followed it
shall re-attempt again
loved
Esker
Tue, 2013-01-08 07:20
Thats what avante garde is Loved
for that double take....
take one...
take two...
I see faces in the crowd
in passing on the street
the so many mundane
and ordinary
and then
I stop
and
re-attempt again
another look
at something that I
could have missed
A Wonder
"if poetry were all red dots
I would be the one
to examine the green"
Esker 2013..
Thank You!
loved
Tue, 2013-01-08 07:26
i will or would look out for all those who are in ....BLUES
"if poetry were all..... red dots
I would be the one
to examine the ..........green"
NICE work friend
I really enjoy your works
even if my mind needs to be
polished
loved
Esker
Tue, 2013-01-08 07:53
No polish Loved
but is it not true that are raised to fall into concept facts of
this and that
Poetry for me and re occurence of theme
is like recognizable signal
Man needing this that we search faces
and then the sky for images and radio waves
to see if there are more that repeat pattern
or send out order from the void
We seek out the unknowns too sometimes
I like that you grasp greatly this concept humour
I put past here on comments
One of my favourite authors of long ago was Margaret
Atwood and one of the canadian covers of her works
was circles with one out I think...(could be wrong)
its an old image used
which is basically binary now
or like the complex bar scan or image codes now
that work for cell phones...
Point and shoot grey scale pixel "fingerprints"
that apps can read and run an ad basically
1111111111101111111111111111101111110
etc
patterns are nice
but pondering poetry is for me a joy
I shall now look for Blues
also
thank You
Geezer
Tue, 2013-01-08 17:28
I think that...
you are much the same as I, insomuch as you look for the differences in the patterns of humanity. i love trying to figure out the simple things in life. Like t.v. commercials and how they appeal to certain types of people or why some people don't seem to care if they hurt others as long as their needs are met.
Sometimes the answers scare me. I did like one line in particular:
"Threaded fears invaded the oil crisp slide" Those are two words that I would never expect to see or hear in the same sentence.[ oil and crisp ] I did see though, that in the context that you used them, they seem perfectly natural. Huh! Great work as usual, ~ Gee
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