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Quiet Ruler

Submitted by chevyvent on Fri, 2017-07-07 17:34

Simple man
How do you rest
Explain for me
I don't know many of you

This world makes you scarce
Is sleep a kind of adventure
I feel I've missed its meaning
Release from cares, or is

It simple understanding
That leaves you with your ease

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weirdelf

Fri, 2017-07-07 17:57

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I've got the same questions.

And a question for you. Is the space before punctuation a device or an error?

cheers,
Jess
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'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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chevyvent

Sat, 2017-07-08 23:52

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Where do I get my ticket to see you in Vegas man ?

Mario Vitale

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weirdelf

Sun, 2017-07-09 04:30

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not performances, in Vegas.

Seriously, what is it with the punctuation? An affectation or do you not realise that you don't use a space before punctuation marks?

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

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