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Soft and petite
U would mistake her for weak
She is half woman half god
Dutifully wearing her crown, king
When life visits her in form of red fluid and pain
She knows even in that there is life to gain
A home,queen,girl she is all of these
If somehow u forgot that, remember this

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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I was having mad cramps
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A short write of a Queen, there could be much more to this it started and needed to carry on a little more.
Yours Ian..

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

I thought so too... but I went blank

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