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Punctuated Life [Sunku]
Commas
semicolons
keep me going
I hate
to live in
parenthesis
my keys
in life are
shift and press 1
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
raj
Sun, 2018-06-10 05:51
Thanks Hommies
It's so good to know that you took time to read this poem. Positive comments coming from the accomplished poets like you are like tonic and mean a lot.
regards...
raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Mon, 2018-06-11 13:20
In the relative context you
In the relative context you are definitely way more accomplished than an amateur like me ...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
raj
Mon, 2018-06-11 14:22
thanks MarkL for the visit
thanks MarkL for the visit and your humorous response...
have i tickled your muse to Sunku? :)
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raj (sublime_ocean)