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Punctuated Life [Sunku]

Commas
semicolons
keep me going

I hate
to live in
parenthesis

my keys
in life are
shift and press 1

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 

Comments

It's so good to know that you took time to read this poem. Positive comments coming from the accomplished poets like you are like tonic and mean a lot.

regards...

raj (sublime_ocean)

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In the relative context you are definitely way more accomplished than an amateur like me ...
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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thanks MarkL for the visit and your humorous response...

have i tickled your muse to Sunku? :)
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raj (sublime_ocean)

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