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prosaically poetic this

sure my mind is a jigsaw puzzle what it says when heaven knows I fill in all gaps where the rivers flow and that you do know shall post some more guffaws all will love all my flaws then go rolling on the floor what do they say rfoll etc or lol be it so be it happy shall compose more as i get out of thei going and coming like one does on a see saw or sea shore and soon I will compose myself as before what a poetic wow

sure my mind is a jigsaw puzzle
what it says when
heaven knows
I fill in all gaps
where the rivers don’t flow
and
that you do know
shall post some more guffaws
all will love all my flaws
then go rolling on the floor
what do they say
Rfoll etc or lol
be it so be it happy

shall compose more
as I get out of the going and coming
like one does on a see saw
or sea shore
and
soon I will compose myself
as before what a poetic
view
wow

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You are as a piece of driftwood not wanting to touch the shore
because if you do you would not be driftwood anymore.
Then you may be captured by just anyone walking by
Then you could be burnt on a fire under evenings sky.

Rather to be a ship on the Oceans swell
seeking new lands where you would dwell
So as you set sail I shall wish you well
Hurry up back better the devil you know in this hell

Looks like I have become stuck in the well, well if this should happen to you, carefully knock the soil down from the sides, till you can walk out.
La La Yours Sparrow.

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

myself wondering just what you meant, and then trying to figure it out. You give me puzzles and I love it! Thanks for another one, ~ Gee

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this puzzle has been germinated
by friend Ian
just ask him
he would be better to explain.

what a poet had in his mind
is the crux of all poetry
keep that in mind
and
see how many different versions
will evolve out of a single puzzle.
of mine
and
the reader need to his mind refine
for the poetic thought must be divine.

loved

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