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progressive poetry....Neopoets gift

BY JESS''''I wasn't pre-empting when I said recently your poetry is getting better.
I was right. I think you are putting more thought into it.''''''

You have shown me the right path
into that tunnel of darkness
I groped all life long
now I wouldn't let you go
for the remaining life
which ain't
I suppose is too long ...

I stand upon the pedestal of time
where I can be kicked anytime
by the long hands of the creator
which once sent me
across the universe
to promote
FREE VERSE...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments

i like this
nothing i would think to add or take away

love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

you too accept that .....
I have improved
and
am now worthy of being read ...
ere life does ebb..

loved

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