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Prisca enang is missing

and acolytes of callow youth
to make minors centigrade of descry
utopian, will you awaken acquiescence
Palestine in its boyish age,
attrition fright palsy
but masquerade sentinels trees stand
over mortal tiredness, worthless than demented brigands
amok basketsfull yarn small ship worlds
reclusivity a starry eyed obeisance
purported prima causa,
if i die and i dont see king David,
no i must.

paper scribes and the fax machine revere
as a contra dogma you must pay
to this task masters
zilch profusions berserk furiously
will you yet awaken gleeful
when atlas is very easy transformatory
cry me a river and ghost buster
hallucinations minds fools paradise
this man, infamous irregularity
known as enchanted lands natures
schizophrenia ricochet irrelevant hominid guardians
or choose nightmare world caused by
An African man for wisdom
put the mucous of domesticated lid
into his optical peripheral
then there was a cow, with a herd
and the herdsman of an imam knew
who traditional his gourd,
seven eight nine ten to twelve
are the hours of dusk and dust

now Prisca Enang is missing..........
or isn't she?
twinkle Nigeria and brittle bright
while at ever youth-dawn you own, don't throw.............
Prisca Enang in Sambisa, her captors
men but the animals of freewill
and that has become the greatest undoing
a cursed state, especially if involuntary
veteran with the scars of appointment
resurrects the beast hibernating within
with gory manifestations due to living perfunctory
pessimistic they are called,
why won't they see gloom?
so the imam wept for the herd, and the herdsmen
knowing they never return
holy ointment cynic Topsy Torry moments
amorphous remorse the avenging goddess of wrath
narcissistic ICARUS or Bellerophone
pervading pheromones covertly interested
dystrophy parched palates painfully constricted
peristaltic journey Ghrelins defend code - red

............. told that for precursor eternity early
by visuals which would be blind to him
he must use a pregnant wife profusion
this he must to save his sight,
.... have you.... have i
imam no altruism at first conquered visions
no rapture, pauched glitters of life's dainties
prowling for easy conquest
like hovering recon satellites
with warped wisdom, the flower attempts facing the world
as shield against remorse
who damaged their whorls
soon becoming play things to blind florists
truly lost gem haughtiness
like armadillos are unaffected
female blessings of bundles destroyed

why are echoes in the daylight the low?
the implicate transcend ascendents;
the imam cried for he loves the herdsman
but the herdsman in prudence knew his day less
seven of pharaoh's handicap, the poor ones
yet the most glut, he gave for the same free will
in prayer that prayer be heard for the wailer
who of cost knew this end
and the prelate that he hears afar
matron are basis for unemployment
if not such of this you's?
it is true that confidant is the greatest associate
......... but it keeps me wondering
the hand that does evil,
evil will upset it,
..why should i stir it up
she leaves no footprint
how will we bring her for the exorcism of demons

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
Is the internal logic consistent?
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Comments

This went over my head, but you asked for the "raw truth", so I'll say that clarity sometimes has to replace a bit of the imagination. But truly that may just be me. I will look at some of your other posts though and see where you take me.

W. H. Snow

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As Wesley has said that it goes over his head, I believe you are writing of the children that have been taken but can't be sure.
Your words are of Nigeria or African structure, then in one line you say:- "like armadillos are unaffected" now this took the whole thing and brought in a creature from the Americas, it would be better to use an African creature such as an Aardvark, otherwise it makes no sense.
There are many in the world that are unaware of things going on away from their countries, so they become lost where you refer to local things.
I think you need to write two types of Poetry, one that is of local standing for your people for their history, and another type for general feelings and activities in the world.
Your word power excels most writers but they have to be moderated into a n appeal to the majority of the people out there.
You take care over there and "I see you",
Yours Ian.T

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