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The Power of Silence

She was powerful
For the words
She didn’t speak

If she opened
Her mouth
You knew
It would be

A rudder
Or a cleaver
A stitch
Or a glass of water

She chose
Her words well

And her silences
Even better

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A well thought out piece and tells much in those few words as the lady,
Yours Ian ..

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thanks Ian!

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perfect write!
i especially like the cadence

IRiz

thank you!

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I couldn't have said it better myself! I was thinking it! But trying to be the better person, haven't said it.
Oh, I'm sure you don't know the person I am speaking of personally, but then again, a weed by any other name is still a weed! Nice job, in connecting with the reader. ~ Geezer.
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thanks geezer. glad it connected!

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