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I'm just any others
day's dream
they can see

at night those who dream too
get wet
despite the snow

the hour of meeting me
the sun has to

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
the hungry poeyet
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


I'd like to see "yet" at the end of the first stanza, though.

Respectfully, Race

"Laws and Rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" - Race-9togo

With grace

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The 4-3-4 line stanzas work for me. Effective use of white space…

Don’t know what relation the title has to the poem…

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this verse is as an answer to a stupider verse
some poet conversed thanks

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