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Pot melting?
From all the places
An ethnic stew of faces
New castes of races
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Cloudthings
Fri, 2019-03-15 09:02
It really does have an appeal
Not sure if any critique is needed here - so simply, it says what it needs to!
Cheers
Anni
My dear friend always told me "Water the seeds of joy first"