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Porn ...commentary on sex ...explicit

when i want inspiration to write poetry
i watch a heaving tempest of kisses
they have a better flavor
than cooking shows

what's prettier than pretty pretty
in pigtails
shaking her delicious
derriere whipped Soufflé?

i'm kissing butter princess
witchy tits
spread lickity splits
eating her
with a big wide shit eating grin
like an open face Dagwood

what's more poetic than that hopeful glaring
of
Adonis's plumper in paradise
filling Cleopatra's slathered meringue?

ga-ga-ga-gag me, daddy
merciless, pa-leazze
fluttered big wet talking eyes
like pools of blue honey
getting it zigged zagged
hard against a redraw mouth
throttling fluted gullet
while eager throat gasps
a symphonic music of the spheres
in relentless staccato chokes
lovin her big devil dick splashing
all gym built wonder-boy
a litter of boners and tongues
licking pig greedy
rapturous milkshake waterfalls

whimpering
mmmmmm
oooh big daddy
oh my fuckin god
pillar of colossus
you Tunisian donut you
pierce me like a spoon
through summer guava

oh my god
oh my god
oh my god
ohhh ohhh ohhh
ooooooooooooooooooo

who screams like that eating lunch
but a half ate apricot?

better than a football game
I'd rather take her Greek
more fun than math or small talk
preferable to a pat on the back at work
or a ridged procession at a funeral

oh beautiful dark fig
squatting crotch candy
bubbling tapioca pot
wired into the labyrinth of me
queen of
spun sugar cums
all pyrotechnics
and fluttering sinews

if you asked most
do they watch porn
they'd grow smug like a senator
or punch you in the mouth
outwardly high-minded
refusing the blessing of a
video fuck parade
of pirouetting vaginas
and glistening areolas
for the glory
of the secret masturbation ceremony

the sex moralists
only good for a secret diddle
living their lives
with passions submerged
and nothing to confess
except for guilty offerings
as they wander through dreamland shopping malls
wanting to know
Victoria's dirty little secret
seduced
but not caressed
by
a mouthpiece for castrated dreams

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I see you are mounting your campaign... Good luck!
It's eaten; not ate. ~ Geezer.
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well yeaha ....but you'll see other writes too, I took poetic license with ate very consciously for its vernacular edge and sound ...sorry if it didn't work for you

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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

America is a strangely puritan place compared to most Europe, where porn is accepted as quite normal. For decades porn can be easily found on TV along with the soccer game and book beat.

If it inspires your muse, tant mieux (so much the better). Unlike most readers on this site, I have no problem with a longer poem.

The older I get the less I watch porn..penis, vaginas, in/out... as Woody Allen might say, fffnnneehhh.
But we all eat, dump, and have orgasms, so it is an important subject. You handle it with good humor and sarcasm.

I've been to Tunisia. Not sure what you mean by that, but I might be out of the loop on the modern lingo of new positions.

Glad to meet such a liberated poet. Odes to porn are a rarity.

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

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Well on a personnel note ill confess I'm 71 yrs old with a strong sex drive
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Glad you liked the ink ;)

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