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jane210660
Mon, 2016-11-07 05:59
I think this is rather neat.
I think this is rather neat. It says a great deal, within the constraints of its form.
Short and pithy. I like it. Jx
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OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2016-11-07 06:21
Jane210660
I appreciate you expression of pithy for my Rhyku!
I wanted to condense the long election cycle into three lines and am glad that it achieved the goal.
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Mon, 2016-11-07 06:56
I wish it could be as
I wish it could be as condensed in real life!
Jx
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OriginalRhyku
Mon, 2016-11-07 17:43
Yes
Fortunately, we are at D-Day and we can put this behind us barring any recounts in case of a tie.
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